MY RHYMING POEM
I'm listening to you rabble, and you don't find it absurd
That I cannot interject - I cannot put in a word
Your personal issues may be spicy, but it's a one way conversation
But it's okay, I'm a writer - I can benefit from information
- By Sherry Hill
MY HAIKU
Tell me your story
I know you need some comfort
But let me tell mine
- By Sherry Hill
APPRECIATIONS
I believe it's important to not be so full of ourselves. People help you along the way. So let's not be lazy about giving thanks.
I performed at my regular venue (Avant Gardens) as a guest dancer in July, and I really appreciated the host and the awesome audience! It was so packed and active.
I can't wait for the next event.
THE CHILLING CORNER
Because sometimes you need to chill
Books
For the following books, I received a free digital copy from www.storycartel.com in exchange for a review:
Rebellious Heiress by Karla Darcy
Great plot and excellent characterization. I really like the characters especially Tristram and Lady Wynham. In some sections, the pace was too slow due to wordiness, regency language, and too much dialogue. But since the plot was good, I was patient and tolerated it. The ending was cute and make me smile.
15 Minutes to Change Your Life by Matt S. Law
I love when the author wrote about habits. This made me think. I made some changes in my routine - such as drinking a glass of water and eating before going to work. I now made those routines habits which helps me meet some of my health goals.
The book hints at spirituality since God was mentioned several times. This could help for people who are motivated by this.
Overall, the book is basic but can help people who don't have any direction.
B-More Stories by Jeff Elkins
This is a great book! The short stories are cute and they tie in together somehow. Reoccurring Chris is so mysterious that I want to learn more about him. Tucker, David, and Rashid interactions are so funny! The Baltimore Love Story was just darling. The voice in this book is powerful and well-written. I can't wait for the author to expand on some of the stories. I'm looking forward it.
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The Edge of Never by J.A. Redmirski
Enjoyable read. I love the characters - especially Andrew. I love the way Andrew's secret was not revealed until the end. The pacing was great. Certain scenes were funny such as the shopping conversations. I also loved the $500 bathroom scene. The sex scenes were steamy and beautifully written.
I was wondering about Camryn and Andrew's finances on the road trips since they didn't have jobs. But most of the story was keeping it real such as bad breath and weird people on a long bus ride.I look forward to reading more books from the author.
Song
If you need comfort, this song is for you. It's so soothing that it listens to you. Check it out.
THE LEARNING CORNER
Vocabulary
gauche - adjective - lacking social grace, sensitivity, or acuteness; awkward; crude;tactless
"gauche." Dictionary.com Unabridged. Random House, Inc. 10 Aug. 2013. <Dictionary.comhttp://dictionary.reference.com/browse/gauche>.
Sentence
Although the zombie's behavior was a bit gauche, I appreciated his effort in learning the art of conversation.
Learning Moment
I learned that I should always drink water especially in this heat.
Z-JOURNAL
I learned that I should always drink water especially in this heat.
Z-JOURNAL
Some people rabble a lot. I can understand rambling. Some people are excited about something. Some people need comfort. Some people need validation. Some people have problems getting to the point. Some people like to tell stories (true or not). Some people (like me) wants to hear their own voice (I have a beautiful one).
But I think everyone knows someone that rabbles way too much. I'm talking about the ones that just don't seem to shut up. It's nearly impossible to get a word in - and if you try, they will always speak over you. They are having their monologue and could be quite annoying. Instead of having conversation, they should have just spoken into a digital recorder.
Although chronic ramblers can be nerve-wracking, they can be quite useful. It helps me develop characters that people dislike. Sometimes ramblers give TMI (Too Much Information) which can enhance a story. So ramblers - just keep on talking. You are making me a better writer. Just make sure the details are exciting and juicy. Don't worry, I won't use your name.
TOO MUCH Z-NESS?Do you find yourself getting lazy? Maybe someone called you lazy and that you need to get off your butt. Perhaps you're not accomplishing your goals like you should. Are you blaming the government for everything? Well, it's time for you to tackle your excessive Z-ness. I hope this tip helps you.
Are you one of the chronic rabblers? If so, know that you're not alone. Sometimes people are so focused on what they want to say instead of hearing what others want to say - but don't be lazy about learning the art of conversation. Here are some tips. Make sure you share the tips (especially in the workplace because there's always at least one person who talks too much).
Tips
You need to chill. Rest your mouth. If you feel the need to open it, just close your eyes and take a deep breath. Let the other person speak.
You need to pause. Don't talk on and on without commas, dashes, semicolons, and periods. You don't need to make everything you say run-on sentences.
Imagine yourself in the other person's shoes. Think about what a person could be feeling if you're dominating the conversation. It's like what you have to say is more important than what the other person have to say. That can make the other person feel like crap. Be mindful.
If you must ramble, please make the details exciting. Please! Talking about your pets, complaining, and making excuses are not interesting. If your dog is a alien, your boss is a zombie, or if your family member is a shapeshifter - that's exciting. Please don't bore the other person to exhaustion and exasperation. That's just wrong.
