The Last Virgin Alive by Stephanie Crosby
2 out of 5 stars
I received a free digital copy from storycartel in exhange for a review.
This book had great voice, and the theme is good.
Belaboring of the character's points was too much and it slowed the pace at too many points in the book. I felt that her dialogue were repeated in different ways without moving forward. Some of the sentence structure was awkward, and I was distracted by the lack of needed punctuation and correct formatting.
This book has potential because the theme is good, people can relate to the character regarding self-image, and the ending was cute. With some polish, and more character development and setting, I believe the book can be incredible.
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